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She steps off the bus... Finally free
Free from all the responsibilities and expectations of her other life
She takes a breath of the air
The wind whispered "Freedom"
She could smell it, from the blooming cherry blossoms to the nearby resteraunt
Then he catches her eye
She knew him from somewhere
Maybe those dreams... Maybe in a fog
He looked back at her and smiled
He thought the same as her
She walked up to him
He, knowingly grabs her hand
They walk off through the scenic views of monuments and the breathtaking sunset
As they sit on the side of a hill, overlooking the beauty of the Patomic River
He leans over and whispers in her ear, the words she loved
"Freedom"
©2008-2009 ~Iluhvedwardcullen13
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DC inspired me to write this... It is a very breathtaking place....Very FREE...LOL
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awww, i love it! your an awesome writer billie!=]]]

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rainbows arn't all gay...only the good ones are! lol =]
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thanx

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"What if I'm not the superhero? What if I'm the bad guy?"-Edward Cullen

"...Am I feeling lucky? Well, do ya do ya punk?"-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

"Forever in a world alone can feel like eternity. Forever in a world with you couldn't be better."
your welcome! and i cant wait to see the play! =]]]

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rainbows arn't all gay...only the good ones are! lol =]
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OMG u are a GREAT writer!!!!

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I dont no what to out on here lol
!Haley!
okay so ur like ugh! that bitch she didnt even comment me on this...well i just got on and saw i had a new"message" (deviant) and i was all excited and thought of ur story (still waiting) and so then i saw "freedom" and though well crap that sux no new story....but then i read it and was all like damn i love (luhv) it

=]

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Somebody may beat me, but they are going to have to bleed to do it.-Steve Prefontaine

I will never die.-Matt Hardy

Nothing is really work unless you would rather be doing something else.- J.M. Barrie
YAY.... Its gonna b relly good

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"What if I'm not the superhero? What if I'm the bad guy?"-Edward Cullen

"...Am I feeling lucky? Well, do ya do ya punk?"-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

"Forever in a world alone can feel like eternity. Forever in a world with you couldn't be better."
Thnx!!!

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"What if I'm not the superhero? What if I'm the bad guy?"-Edward Cullen

"...Am I feeling lucky? Well, do ya do ya punk?"-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

"Forever in a world alone can feel like eternity. Forever in a world with you couldn't be better."
I'm glad u like it.... it just always come so natural!!!

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"What if I'm not the superhero? What if I'm the bad guy?"-Edward Cullen

"...Am I feeling lucky? Well, do ya do ya punk?"-"Dirty" Harry Callahan

"Forever in a world alone can feel like eternity. Forever in a world with you couldn't be better."
Ur welcome

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I dont no what to out on here lol
!Haley!

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